You clearly have a scanner.
This was really fun for me to watch because I personally really love experimental animations, so this was really pleasing to my eye. Eyes.
The whole thing seemed pretty well thought out, from the textures of the paper used for the background (I've done some stuff like this, check out "treekeepers") I think they were graph paper and lined paper turned on its side, to the distortion of the voices. The music mixed really well with it, and the characters were well drawn and for the most part well animated. My only suggestions would be to maybe quiet down the distorted voices, because for the time being they're really loud, and make the buildings in the scene with the spinning sun bigger. It was kinda hard to tell they were buildings.
Menus and text weren't bad, actually, the opening menu wasnt my favorite because of how the 666 seemed really detatched from the "beyond insanity" and with both of them kinda sprawled across the top corner of the page, I honestly did not know that was your screen name. Also, all of the text, including the text in the conversation about horses coming for tea (maybe a bit too weird) (but either way, lol. ) seemed really bitmappy and pixelated. The best example of this is when the meatballesque guy says "I was waiting for the rain" and the title, fleep, on the menu.
All in all, I really did like this, but if you do happen to want to redo it, think about these suggestions. I 5'd it, so dont worry about the not-ten review score. :)
Thanks,
Morrowdays
Oh, and what was up with the dead guy at the end? That confused me.