Score: 10

"love it"

submission: Sofuz Part 2

date: November 20, 2009

your walks are funny newshape. they're great. especially the green dress girl, you've got a lot of style.

Score: 10

"AHHHH"

submission: Birthday triple collab

date: August 20, 2009

sooooo soorrrrry for missing this!!!

I havent been checking anything for ages!!!

ahhhh!!!

Im not dead. really sweet of you four to do this. all of the parts were awesome and I really liked fautzo's voice. boogley your text thing was intense.

<3

THANKYOUZ

Score: 10

"awesome stuff"

submission: Undead Steel 2

date: March 1, 2009

your characters are so cool. love the walks.

Score: 9

"rawrawr"

submission: Jim and Pals Shorts: Ep 8

date: October 3, 2008

motion guides are actually useful if you do it right. :P mostly its for adding an arch to tweens. so the object doesn't just go straight :)

funny cartoon. at first I was like, damn I hate jimtopia, none of it is animated and its all tweens >:( but then it got really funny and enjoyable and you managed to use that basic animation stuff as part of the story.

so it was really good. you've definitely got writing skills, thats for sure.

if you want something to work on, try some frame by frame animation. most of your stuff is tweened, and its good to know both pretty well.

Score: 6

"Pretty similar to the other stuff"

submission: I was born(A Unicorn)

date: October 1, 2008

Born to byte, your section didn't really seem any different than the other thing I reviewed, or the Beep Beep thing. Its almost as if you've taken all the same symbols and changed the rhythm slightly to match the song. still fun to watch, but you could probably do more.

Lazy Apples, I haven't seen any other stuff from you, it seemed good. similar to B2b's as well though. good job lipsyncing, it was pretty cool. some of the syncing was off in places but for the majority it was clean.

Score: 8

"not bad"

submission: BING BING

date: September 4, 2008

a lot of the stuff I had seen in beep beep already, so it wasn't entirely interesting, but I still fived it because I liked it for the most part.

here's some advice:
when you're animating to music, its totally fun and great to just mess around like you were with no story, but when the only movement happens on the main beats, it starts to seem storyboardy, and a storyboard with no story is kind of pointless!

I like animation/animating without a story, but Im finding more and more that its important to people and that I feel happier making things that have stories that are also animated to my level of quality. you may not feel the same way, but you might some day. thats not so important.

the main thing is that actions shouldnt just happen on the main beat (or bing, haha), its generally more enjoyable when movement is a relatively constant element, and important movements happen on the main beat. then its like, 'OH MAN LOOK HOW AWESOME BORNTOBYTE IS AT SYNCING!' right now its pretty good but it could be a lot better with more movement.

lol, I know that lots of movement is harder to animate though too, which is Im sure one of the reasons you kept this pretty simple. your frame by frame is fun and light, and it would definitely be overwhelming to animate something of that length with like, 2000 unique frames.

keep it up, you seem to be improving nicely.

moro

Score: 9

"I R SKARED OF U MR ANIGENZZ"

submission: RWD: 017

date: August 31, 2008

cool stuff, its a neat style and the story was cool. I liked your characters. some good oldschool stuff in there too, with the eyes, and the hand changing position and what not.

lmao, nice song too. seemed to fit nicely.

Score: 10

"great work"

submission: - The Worlds -

date: August 22, 2008

you'e got so much talent and creativity.. its amazing. ROLLINGROLLINGROLLING

Score: 10

"awesome!"

submission: Clockwork Racer

date: August 15, 2008

good work nick, this was really fun. I really enjoyed it. love the ending too ^_^

Score: 8

"lmao"

submission: Two-Hour Time Trial VII

date: August 11, 2008

thats right, why bother with a really amazing, well organized collab with amazing authors backing it when you can do something ALONG THE SAME LINES in two hours? hahaha.

this was pretty not bad for a two hour collab. lots of traced dad'n'me stuff to look at. nick's madness part was pretty cool. I like how pixel madness looks. but the last part with alien hominid shooting chocolate guy and then bursting from that guy from blockhead's chest really takes the cake. amazing.

don't you think you're kind of milking it now rudy? I mean, you are making a full out newgrounds collab, and you've done a whole bunch of these time trials now, so what was the point of this one?

also, I remember you complaining about fishhook making a whole bunch of black and white collabs, but you're time trial collection list is almost just as long! ;)

Moro